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Hello guys this is my new song! i hope you like it!  Any criticism is welcome!🎹

 

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Focusing in on the section around the one minute mark, the counterpoint between the upper and lower voices was a little strained when there are leaps to and away power chords in the upper register (perfect fourths) in an unrelated key. 

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This is quite an epic piece.  very good.. perhaps some gentle EQ'ing on some tracks to clarify what the different instruments are doing.  The low mids are quite dense ( bordering on getting muddy).  Perhaps some of the strings play an octave higher, or voices.  

The movement and orchestration are QUITE GOOD.. 

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On 6/21/2019 at 10:40 PM, Monarcheon said:

Focusing in on the section around the one minute mark, the counterpoint between the upper and lower voices was a little strained when there are leaps to and away power chords in the upper register (perfect fourths) in an unrelated key. 

 

thanks for listening! and sorry for late response! i'm going to try to improve !

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On 6/24/2019 at 5:29 PM, mark styles said:

This is quite an epic piece.  very good.. perhaps some gentle EQ'ing on some tracks to clarify what the different instruments are doing.  The low mids are quite dense ( bordering on getting muddy).  Perhaps some of the strings play an octave higher, or voices.  

The movement and orchestration are QUITE GOOD..  

 

thanks mark!! thanks for listening , sorry for late response! .. and yes  its not my best song 😞 thanks for criticism. i'm going to try to improve! PD:  im not very good in mix and mastering.. 😞

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