Petite Chanson for Violin, Clarinet and Piano

Hi,

Here is a short and lyrical piece for Violin, Clarinet and Piano.

My first idea was a song for Sopran and Alto, but I choose violin and clarinet instead, that's why the range of both instruments are in the sopran and alto resister.

I'm looking forward to your feedback.

Edited July 4, 20196 yr by Guillem82

This has a nice melody and a good accompaniment. It's lovely throughout. I would suggest not stopping the rhythm at bars 10 and 42. Just keep it going. Also, you have a nice modulation going at bar 56, but a break in the melody at this point is disconcerting. You might consider holding that D for two more bars until it overlaps with the clarinet's entrance on F. And then continue with a brief harmonization of it. Something like that, just to make things flow better.

Beautiful melody—nice job! I think the pedal markings are on the wrong stave in the score... I've only ever seen them beneath the lower piano staff. Again, great job!

Hi Ken320 and Tónskáld, I really appreciate your comments!

@Tónskáld: you are totally right, I have changed the pedal markings beneath the lower piano staff.

@Ken320: I think is better to stop the rhythm at the end of the phrase, since the phrase have an anacrusic start out of the harmony and without accompaniment, I think it gives a renewing impulse and the start is clearer.  

I have also tried to hold the D from bar 54 two more bars, as you suggested, but I don't find it convincing at all. I think it's more interesting to leave one bar just with the accompaniment. The idea of overlaping violin and clarinet is interesting, and it happends in the final coda (bars 96-108).

Amazing piece! I like how the melody switches between the clarinet and violin throughout.

Thank's for your feedback Calibri!