September 6, 20196 yr What I really love about this piece is the slightly more sparse but equally effective texture. The trio at the beginning was super nice, for instance. I would maybe tighten up the violin line just a tad to sound a little more complementary within the realms of counterpoint, but this was great to lean back and take in.
September 19, 20196 yr Author Thanks Louis and Monarcheon. I will revisit the violin part. I was listening to some Beatles songs, that have the song, 'dis-assembled' (that is you hear solo'd parts, bass only, rhythm guitar with licks. . I notice that the individual parts have a 'wholeness' by themselves. They make a statement. When I listen, especially to some of my earlier pieces. The individual parts, solo'd sound 'wandering', like they don't know what they are supposed to be doing, They fit. but sound kinda 'lost'.
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