Writing a song not sure if the choruses sound too empty? it's like chorus 1 connected to 2.

Writing a song not sure if the choruses sound too empty? it's like chorus 1 connected to 2. 

So I reworked the Choruses some, here we go 

To me it sounds like it could have some sort of bass in the first eight measures, also the end sounded confused a little but I'm amusing it'll lead to another part of the song. Good work.

@Hergusbergus Thank you, I thought of using trombones or something, but still learning how to write for some brass instruments. 

It sounds similar to a Two Steps from Hell opening. 

@Hergusbergus and @Esper Here's a pre-save link to the song set to release on Dec 16, 2019, titled "Dismal Route" https://distrokid.com/hyperfollow/silverwolf/dismal-route . 

@Esper Here's a spotify link if interested 

, song also released on YouTube, Deezer, and MediaNet. 

It sounds good. Intense trailer music. What VST did you use for the percussion sections? 

@Esper LoT ensemble, Dragon ensemble, Remo Rose Bowl 10ft drum from stormdrum 3. Earthquake ensemble, bowed cymbal, Godzilla Hits from stormdrum 2, Bass Drum Concert, from EW symphonic orchestra.

Edited December 19, 20196 yr by SilverWolf