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The first (attempted) Symphony, written by the young composer, Drake King. 

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Hey! It's quite hard to give opinions on a piece without the sheet music. Could you post the sheets so that we could better analise it? 

One way or another, some parts sound very pleasant!

Best wishes, Jean.

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Agreed. Some parts are good but generally the bass is too thick, let alone unbalanced with what's happening above. In the first movement just too thick. [Edit: try to lay out chords so the spacing between lower notes is wider, upper notes closer.] Performed live it will sound pretty muddy and dark. Likewise, try to introduce some dynamics into it. 

All the best with it.

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