Fantasia on Doppo l'oscuro nembo (Bellini)

Bellini is my favorite opera composer of the romanticism. His melodies are unique.

Doppo l'scuro nembo is aromanza of his first opera Adelson e Salvini (a work for his graduation or something like that).

Of course, the original is sublime. But this is my little homage.

11 Fantasia en Fa menor doppo - Flow 1.mp3

Cool piece! First of all, I really like that you put the harmonic analysis in the score. It's cool to follow along with that. 

So, I don't feel that I have any technical suggestions for you. A lot of it sounded rather sparse to me; I'm not sure how else to say that. There were lots of very "open" sounding sounds, and it got a little to persistent for my tastes. 

That being said, I also think it's clear you know what you're doing, and I think this would be really great to hear performed in a concert.

I do like this. I think your harmonic usage is quite interesting -and I'm glad you posted that within your score.

It seems your working a bit on developing your contrapuntal prowess (given this is the second piece written with counterpoint).

All in all, I like it. I think youre on a good track. Keep it up!