January 21, 20206 yr Hello everyone, I am back, this is my new piece, hope you like it and welcome your commentation.
January 21, 20206 yr There's a problem with balance and volume in some parts. I swear I like mixing styles, I don't have problems with that. But it seems you go far sometimes. It begins sounding between baroque and classicist. Then comes the piano with some romantic arpeggios, and there is a part that sonds almost contemporary (m. 194 on.... for example). Or the harmonics in the violin m. 55-56. the themes are very beautiful. I think you have lots of material but with too many styles and techniques.
February 24, 20206 yr This falls into the Andalusian cadence trap of trying to think of something new for every repetition of the hypermeter and it becomes a little boring after a while. Some parts I feel like you're struggling to find something for all the instruments to do. I don't think this is necessary.
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