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"blue moment" - two solos - trumpet and bassoon


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Hi here are two solos under the same topic and piece "blue moment". They are only single instrument lines with no accompanion or background. in those soundfont - mp3 file i selected trumpet and bassoon as main instruments but flute and maybe guitar could play them as well. this could be played half octave lower as well.

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I listened to the bassoon version. I heard some "Bach-like" things in the second repeated section, they reminded me a little of his organ works or cello works with the repeated pinky notes and whatnot. I think the piece would benefit from a clearer harmonic idea, if that makes sense. I had trouble finding cadence points after a while, and it felt a little aimless.

A good work, keep refining!

Gustav

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I struggle to hear a throughline with your voice leading. I don't know, for example, if your fourths are making use of chord tone associates or trying to make a compound melody with parallel fourths, but both have strange implications when related to later parts of the piece.

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