March 20, 20206 yr Can't remember the last time I wrote in 3/4 time. The piece is rather humorous, with the rhythm, and the grasshopper sounds (kinda twisted) Edited March 22, 20206 yr by mark styles
March 21, 20206 yr This piece, although written in 3, is actually in 6. Your drums tell us that. Around 1:12, add a counter melody to change things up! nice work.
March 22, 20206 yr Liked this a lot. A couple points where the counterpoint may fall a little bit like 1:41 with the stepwise bass passing tone not meshing particularly well, but on the whole it's nice to listen to.
March 22, 20206 yr Author Thanks Maestrowick and Monarcheon. I greatly appreciate your thoughts. I will go back and put some more effort. I tried making the pauses more exaggerated, (glitching, weird snd effect etc, but then realized simpler seemed more effective. As I worked on this, the piece seemed to expose it's 'personality' to me..
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