April 8, 20205 yr The first movement of a four movement work, this piece is designed for relatively simple playing and is designed to be pleasant to listen to and enjoy. My own criticisms of it are at the moment it is too short, I am happy for any feedback available.
April 8, 20205 yr I find the recapitulation A little weak. The bridge beetwen the themes is too smooth, most of the time that would be good, but in the case of sonata makes it lost contrast. I liked it overall, maybe it is a sonatina due to his duration. If you want to, you can make a repetition of the exposition, that helps to stablish the tonality and also helps in the lenght xd. Sorry for my bad english. Edited April 8, 20205 yr by Tortualex
April 9, 20205 yr Author @Tortualex any Advice for the recapitulation? Im not entirely sure where to go. I'm adding a bit to the development, or do you reckon is mould leave it as it is
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