April 22, 20206 yr A little different from what I usually post but I've been kinda liking this scary and chromatic sound recently so I thought I'd come up with a haunting theme for something. I present Jump. Any advice or opinions are welcome. Edited April 23, 20206 yr by Some Guy That writes Music
May 13, 20205 yr Can't say it's my favorite, but it's decent. How do you feel about it? It feels like it's ... missing something? I mean, if the song is about suicide by jumping (which I gather from the lyrics, lol), then there could be a more definite sense of struggle - "I'm jumping!" vs. "I can't", you know? You definitely capture uncertainty, for sure 🙂 Not sure what I'd change, but I'd keep plugging away at it because I think you're on the right track for the piece. Keep it up! Gustav
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