cloud10000 Posted June 29, 2020 Share Posted June 29, 2020 hello everyone, this is my new piece, hope you like it the video: https://www.bilibili.com/video/BV1tA411i7zF/ MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Op2 Nr2 > next PDF Op2 Nr2 score 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bradley Scarff Posted July 21, 2020 Share Posted July 21, 2020 Beautiful, Bravo. Truly a gorgeous work, what sort of form would you consider it? a nocturne or something? A few thinks that I though of. The main motif I think is a bit too repetitive in parts particularly from where you bring the A theme in and play it in octaves. The embellishments were really good, personally I'd recommend more of them. I feel the structures a bit loose, I think if you restructured it somewhat you could build towards quite a furious section then decrease before the end. for me the ending felt a bit anticlimactic. I really like this piece. keep up the good work.:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Papageno Posted July 24, 2020 Share Posted July 24, 2020 Beautiful! I hear a thousand decisions in your music, each note well considered and skillfully placed. I wish i had some constructive feedback for you but your level of composition is way beyond mine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thatguy v2.0 Posted July 30, 2020 Share Posted July 30, 2020 I really liked this one too, especially your melody. The pentatonics were a nice treat, and I liked the Chopin-type figures. (I kept thinking Cosmo Canyon from FF7) 😄 Overall, I felt the melody was a bit repetitive, especially since your form felt like a theme and variations. The left hand was a bit dense too, take advantage of the piano's ridiculous range! Great piece, seems like you haven't been around though. My absolute best advice is to post on other's works; you will get a lot more feedback! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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