July 13, 20205 yr This will definitely sound very "old music theory"-like of me, but the parallel octave structure between the bass and the high violin is a little unnecessary, especially since the violin is moving so fast. There's a lot of sonorities to explore there!
July 14, 20205 yr 4 hours ago, Monarcheon said: This will definitely sound very "old music theory"-like of me, but the parallel octave structure between the bass and the high violin is a little unnecessary, especially since the violin is moving so fast. There's a lot of sonorities to explore there! Â Agreed. Great start though, you have a musical voice, I'm excited to hear where you take this one. Is it complete or is it a work in progress? Awesome job so far, keep me updated!
July 22, 20205 yr A few notes for this one: 1. You might want to use more than two chords. 2. Melody, for me, came in too late. 3. It sounds as if you built into a point then looped the exact same bars underneath the melody. 4. It's too short thus not giving any place for thematic development.
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