Tune for review

I am posting music tune composed by my 13 year old son on Ableton live lite. Any review/advice will be appreciated. 

I'm sure a timbral effect was desired from the fast notes, but it comes off sounding strange, even for something in a pseudo-alankar style. Similarly, why the panning at the end? Just because? 
The setup with a double note motif in the beginning is an interesting idea that is interesting to the point that it makes subsequent passages feel irrelevant. The high register off-modal notes are my favorite part of this, and could be layered to help the tonic elaboration.

Thanks Monarcheon for your detailed analysis and comments, will pass this to my son. 

It has an hypnotic modal-ethnic flavor.

Thanks Luis for your comments, will pass this to my son Aditya