September 10, 20205 yr Hi everyone, just wanted to share a song I wrote and produced. I'd love to hear what you thinkHeartbroken (master).mp3
September 10, 20205 yr Cool, I like changes in rhythm and the bass... I had the feeling of listening to The Smiths, the voice of the singer is soft and beautiful. Edited September 10, 20205 yr by Luis Hernández
September 10, 20205 yr Author Hi, thank you, appreciate it! Edited September 10, 20205 yr by Aled Edwards
September 10, 20205 yr I enjoyed it! There is some tonal ambiguity in this. It's unclear whether your chord progression starts on the bVI or the IV. Assuming that the piece is in a major key the progression is IV, ii, I, vi. In a minor key it reads as bVI, iv, bIII, i. From the introduction and the end I infer that the key is major though. I could listen to this over and over without getting tired of it. I just wished I understood all the lyrics. Would you post the lyrics here in the forum for us to read? I like how the singer spends most of the time on the major 3rd - it's a great mood you set here. Great job!
September 11, 20205 yr Author Hey, thanks, glad you liked it! And yes it's in a major key. Here are the lyrics: Overcast with no sun, on a rocky beach Seems to fit the mood, I wait for you Show up and you're late, going a different way Seems like our time, it has run out Heartbroken, you've left me heartbroken Harsh were the words you said to me I'll take my turn in misery Three weeks have gone by, and I just pass the time Dimming all the lights, I'm on my own You are not that great, I have seen of late Can't believe that I thought you were the dream Heartbroken, you've left me heartbroken Harsh were the words you said to me I'll take my turn in misery Heartbroken, you've left me heartbroken Heartbroken, you've left me heartbroken
September 22, 20205 yr Ever heard of Steely Dan? Not that your music sounds similar, but they had a cool way of writing lyrics that were dark or sad underneath the surface of upbeat groovy music. I like that clash, nice work! Post more of your work mate 😄
September 26, 20205 yr Author Thanks! I have heard some of their music but I'm not super familiar with them. And cheers, I will be posting more
October 14, 20205 yr I like it. Very light and "comfortable" song. I would say the song, you can listen to the replay. The soloist's voice is super. But in my opinion, the melody is too cheerful for such a name, although everyone has their own vision) Edited October 14, 20205 yr by Harrysalvatore1989
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