November 20, 20205 yr Hey guys. How are you all doing? Hope everything is fine and well. Here it goes a new song... ''My Last Rock N' Roll''! ======================================= My previous songs: https://www.youngcomposers.com/t35836/new-sound-delicious-grace/ https://www.youngcomposers.com/t37009/delicious-grace-the-boy-from-memphis/ https://www.youngcomposers.com/t37305/delicious-grace-chaos-and-shame/ https://www.youngcomposers.com/t37476/delicious-grace-nocturnal/ https://www.youngcomposers.com/t37761/delicious-grace-queen-of-england/ https://www.youngcomposers.com/t38464/delicious-grace-desperate/ https://www.youngcomposers.com/t39242/delicious-grace-wonder/ https://www.youngcomposers.com/t40265/delicious-grace-rosa-glamurosa/ Edited November 20, 20205 yr by alcapone_dudu
November 20, 20205 yr Author Lyrics: Don’t mind my attitude towards you It’s hard to live the moment when there’s nothing for you Sitting on a golden chair means nothing these days If I was up to move a finger and get it done by today! Declare upon my act it’s a matter of fact Bridges are burning all around and so fast My empty glass is now my main enemy Waiting for tomorrow is no more of a choice for me! chorus: Yeah my last rock n’ roll Once I was a king and you were standing bellow Yeah my last rock n’ roll I’ll make you dance and stand on your toes! Two plus one by now isn’t just three I’ve already counted all the stars that can be Excuse my dirty manners and suit yourself The rage of my staff is the last thing you will tell!
December 5, 20205 yr Alright, so overall, I liked this. The instrumental was solid and the structure of the song was really well done! If I had to offer any criticisms, the major I would say what when you're recording the vocals that you try backing up from the mic a bit and singing out a bit more. Singing out will amp up the amount of power in your voice and being further from the mic will allow you to do so without compromising the volume of the recording. Other little things that I would mention would be to add effects like reverb or distortion to the backing vocals to distinguish them from the lead voice and mixing the instrumental in a more blended fashion so that you don't get exclusively guitar in one ear and exclusively vocals in another, though that all is solely up to the artist's interpretation. Overall, though, this is pretty decent.
December 14, 20205 yr Author On 12/5/2020 at 1:09 AM, SwiggitySwewgity said: Alright, so overall, I liked this. The instrumental was solid and the structure of the song was really well done! If I had to offer any criticisms, the major I would say what when you're recording the vocals that you try backing up from the mic a bit and singing out a bit more. Singing out will amp up the amount of power in your voice and being further from the mic will allow you to do so without compromising the volume of the recording. Other little things that I would mention would be to add effects like reverb or distortion to the backing vocals to distinguish them from the lead voice and mixing the instrumental in a more blended fashion so that you don't get exclusively guitar in one ear and exclusively vocals in another, though that all is solely up to the artist's interpretation. Overall, though, this is pretty decent. I see what you mean and I really appreciate it all inputs. We're struggling with the vocal department, man. It's hard hahaha. Thank you very much for giving it a try.
December 20, 20205 yr Personally, I would double-track the guitar and move the vocals back a bit in the room with reverb.
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