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I like the third one, especially the introduction and ending. It reminds me of César Franck (his famous prélude, choral et fugue). I think it could do with some harmonic or textural variation in the fast section tough. For example, instead of the variations on your theme, you could introduce a new one, or change the accompaniment radically. But in the end I suppose it's a matter of personal preference. Is it you playing? If so, it's quite impressive.

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On 3/29/2021 at 2:26 AM, Pierre dbss said:

I like the third one, especially the introduction and ending. It reminds me of César Franck (his famous prélude, choral et fugue). I think it could do with some harmonic or textural variation in the fast section tough. For example, instead of the variations on your theme, you could introduce a new one, or change the accompaniment radically. But in the end I suppose it's a matter of personal preference. Is it you playing? If so, it's quite impressive.

 

Thank you for your feedback! Thanks to you, I also listened to some new music for me.
Yes, this is my recording. The piece itself was made quite a long time ago. I was just beginning to understand something about making music. So here, harmonically, everything is quite simple.
Thank you again for your comment! I really appreciate it.

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1 hour ago, CyberPianist said:

Thank you for your feedback! Thanks to you, I also listened to some new music for me.
Yes, this is my recording. The piece itself was made quite a long time ago. I was just beginning to understand something about making music. So here, harmonically, everything is quite simple.
Thank you again for your comment! I really appreciate it.

 

No problem! I've listened to some of your more recent music and it's undeniably more natural and flowing. But I think you'd do well to come back to some of these pieces if you find the time, because although less accomplished than your "autumn", I fell they still have a lot of potential. Also, I'm happy I made you discover a new composer!

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