olivercomposer Posted May 28, 2023 Share Posted May 28, 2023 Hello Guys, This is my brand new. What do you think? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Posted May 29, 2023 Share Posted May 29, 2023 Hi @olivercomposer, You have included some exotic instruments and sound effects here with middle east scale for me. I like your new try here! In 2:18 when the brass appears I think you are heading to your familiar style, but you return to the exotic style which is good! Thanks for sharing! Henry 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelCityOutlaw Posted May 30, 2023 Share Posted May 30, 2023 You've definitely got the "palette" of that sort of style down, but I would say that the bassline could be more active and move more contrapuntally to the melody, and your string accompaniment is stepping on the melody a fair bit 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted June 2, 2023 Share Posted June 2, 2023 This has the full flavor of the Middle East and the Mediterranean. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omicronrg9 Posted June 2, 2023 Share Posted June 2, 2023 Hi Oliver. I would say that the strings at the beginning don't convince me much. Apart from that, it was a really enjoyable tune. Kind regards!! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeterthePapercomPoser Posted June 9, 2023 Share Posted June 9, 2023 I like your use of the phrygian dominant scale along with exotic instruments which really lend this piece a very Egyptian atmosphere! Great job with that! I don't think I can really say anything to improve the mood you intended to present/exhibit here. Despite modulating you end the piece in the same key in which you began which shows some craft. Thanks for sharing! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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