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Hi @Marc Deflin! My fav. section is the A major section in b.19 where the flow there is really good. I like the opening cello melody too, though ending on a V/vi then go to I sounds a bit strange to me I personally would prevent to have two 3rds on a major chord unless you really want a very bright sound. I remember the 2nd movement also a slow movement, so maybe having a moderato last mov. sounds a bit less dramatic to my taste. I remember the 1st mov. theme, what's the reason you are bringing those themes back in the lasat movement? Nice job finishing a string quartet! Thx for sharing! Henry

Hello @famedstingray59, Welcome to the forum! What is the film featured in your music? I quite like the a bit post tonal sytle for the unsettling mood plus a pretty satisfying end, though still with some dissonances lingering. Thx for joining our forum and sharing! Henry

Hello @EmotionallyChargedMusic, Welcome to the forum! The music does sound emotional distressed with very heavy bass and low register of piano, before featuring the organ later. It does sound a bit scary to me too and does match the imagery of monsters. Thx for joining the forum and sharing! Henry

That is actually what i planned on doing with that melody!

This is a scene where the main characters were racing against a winter storm blizzard

Hi 🙂 Here's the third and last movement of my first complete string quartet. It's a moderato which starts quietly in the main D Major tone, before modulating in its first theme to a strong A Major viola-leaded melody. Then both main themes from the first and second movements are sequentially reexposed. Follows a happy interlude in D major. Whereafter first theme comes back and developments bring us slightly as a conclusion to the final exposure of the principal theme of this string quartet (the one from the adagio), first hinted at in the background by the viola. Thanks for listening ! 🙂 Regards, Marc

Right now, I’m readying my music project workspace in my computer’s hard drive for my eventual migration from Finale to Musescore and Dorico, e.g. creating MusicXML files. Also, even though burned out, I’m trying very hard to finish my Fantasy Reflections 2nd track for violin and piano. Lastly, I have rough piano sketches for some pop ballads right now, being enamored by my really guilty J-pop phase these past 12 months. Although melodies and colorful chords progressions come relatively easily to me for these pop songs, I’m still doing early research and brushing up on drum patterns, lyrics, and pop instrumentation. Some advice for me is appreciated! ~Frank

Hello @Valerio DallaRagione, Welcome here! I only listened to the very opening of your piano concerto, but I already felt mystical, trance-like, Egyptian vibes. You sure do seem like a really ambitious composer, and it really shows. Keep it up! ~Frank

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Also when the brass is playing the melody I would try to harmonise it. That'll make it sound more 'full'. Although that is also a neat card to only pull later on in the piece, if that melody returns. This also goes for woodwinds, but it is less important there, cause of the different textures the instruments have; when they are playing in unison it'll probably sound more varied already. Brass sounds really epic but also kinda like a sine wave imo... Especially when they are a bit pitchy

Alternative option not bad either. Those things below are supposedly bassoons... Your piece sounds really cool. I'd love to hear it when it is finished 🙂

Wow your brother must be very talented, those two concerti and Carmen Fantasy and Erlkonig and Paganini Variations are among the most virtuosic pieces in violin repertoire, in such a young age!

The one month may be a bit biased as my brother (11) already played Sibelius and Tchaikovsky violin concertos (albeit not perfect), Carmen Fantasy, Erlkonig, and God Save the King Paganini variations among some other pieces. But the cellist I wrote for got scared with double and triple stops (to be fair some of them were a little overboard and that was before learning enough harmony to do so)

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OHH you meant the score order

oh lol nvm then

Wow if it can be rehearsed within a month that would be a dream for me haha! Yeah a fugue as in Baroque style would be difficult to reherase esp. for a six voice fugue. Haha not at all, I feel myself not too qualified on writing fugues sometimes! Thx very much for your reply! Henry

probably a bit hard to sightread, (internal complaints start after 4 accidentals keys for most players), but I don't think its too bad to be performed with a month of rehearsal. Good players might only need a week. The counterpoint sections will probably be the hardest to rehearse. Although probably be a bit awkward like most barque pieces. (not to judge, but most barque pieces don't fit the modern instrument as well as pieces from latter periods). Also probably not qualified to judge on the counterpoint

I'm wrong LoL, this one is a band score rather than an orchestral one.

But you don't only have the viola part follows the piano here, you have the piano playing all 4 parts of the String Quartet which in a way writes like a piano accompaniment to a choir which is common practice there but certainly not a good one here since piano shouldn't be considered an accompaniment in a Piano Quintet. The piano part has its own right to play its own parts, rather only repeating the strings. But ofc if I'm the pianist I would be happy to play it since it would be easy to play with. I 'thing' that having cello plucked would be a nice variation to its part. Remember to hit the like button on the bottom right corner as well so that the reviewer knows that you like their posts. Thx.

I was originally going for a piano quartet (no viola) since I was thinking of having some people perform it, but then one of the violinists stepped up to play viola. Thats why the viola part follows the piano. An extra question: what do you thing about having the cello part plucked for the outer sections

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First piano music composition "The Bitter End" inspired by Akira Yamoka's music An emotionally distressed suicidal woman on the brink of insanity. She begins seeing grotesque monsters manifesting out of her trauma. In shadows deep, her mind unwinds, A fractured heart, a soul confined. Edge of silence, whispers scream, Drowning slow in fractured dreams. Yet through the void, a flicker small, A trembling, fragile, hopeful call. A light so faint, yet softly burns— A chance to rise as darkness turns. The music starts with impending doom and then the piano starts playing and it symbolizes the player begins panicking running escaping from the impending doom as monsters chase.

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Thx! Yeah I do put a lot of effort in this one I have to admit, im order to speak out things I wanna speak long ago. I do hope to write something more unique as I actually never know what my style is! Thx! The philosophical thinking lingers in my mind at least 10 years I believe when I was reading the Chinese Philosophy Classics, and also guided by my Philosophy Professor who is a student of the Grandmasters of New Confucian School, Tang Chun I and Mou Zhongsan. I may not really know their philosophical thoughts, but always feel myself inspired after reading their works, just like after reading listening to a great piece of music or reading great literature. I just try to write what I feel towards Tao here, plus my own experience. I think it will be very difficult to have it recorded or even performed, so now I don’t have the plan. I know the work can be difficult to play, and it’s too long to be performed, as groups now only prefer much shorter works to perform. Henry