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  2. Hi @Syrel, I am glad that Mr. Peter Pencil has such a spouse Penny Pen who was able to call the Police for him. Either way, Peter the Polish Paper comPoser will politely peruse this piece. LoL Actually - my name on a writing forum I sometimes like to frequent is PaperandPencil which I thought was similar enough to make this silly message. I like this piece and how it constantly starts each section of the piece in a new key just all of a sudden - it's very bold that way. I also think that the piano is a very good lead instrument for this despite it being mostly orchestral - it's very well used as a solo instrument. I really like using piano like this if it's the focus of a piece with a little bit of delay added. Thanks for sharing!
  3. Hey @Some Guy That writes Music, This shows quite a harmonic and chromatic fluency which lends itself very well to its emotional expression and extramusical meaning. It is very mournful and sorrowful. I wonder if this might not also fulfill my request of you to compose sadness and sorrow, the emotions I chose from your emotion wheel? Either way it's very good music! I wonder why when I recently started reviewing your music it seemed like you were bottlenecking yourself into just the diatonic notes of a given scale before changing the key signature instead of making use of free chromaticism and modulation like you do here? Clearly, you have the skills I thought you lacked and the ability to channel them towards very emotionally affecting music! Great job and thanks for sharing.
  4. Hi @Cafebabe, In this style of music, the melody, motif or theme usually leads the development of the composition. But I think here you very often let yourself write arpeggios and typical accompanimental patterns without any melodic justification for them - just making your way through chord progressions and figurations over those chords for their own sake which (to me at least) don't sustain musical interest. A chord progression alone doesn't qualify as a motif or theme that can catch the ear, especially when it's ornamented with so much expendable fluff. There is however, a short recurring motif in this piece (C, EDC, GGG) but formally speaking you don't make the development of that motif the main focus of this piece, since the arpeggiations and fireworks and acrobatics aren't related to that theme at all and come off as simple fluff. That's at least how I perceive it. Thanks for sharing!
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  6. The wacky adventures of Inspector Looso - New Fetchflix TV Show soundcloud.com/user-461764443/sets/the-wacky-adventures-of Mr.Peter Pencil, which is well known for his blue suit and lizard pin, vanished during a business trip somewhere in Italy. His mistress Penny Pen was desperate and called the police to investigate. Young Inspector Looso was assigned to this case by his boss hoping this investigation would sharpen his skills. Looso took charge of this case as if he was one of the Raiders of the lost Pencil. Will young Inspector Looso be able to find Mr.Pencil. Let’s hope Mr.Pencil was not violently erased from the surface of the earth? Music: Syrel Photography: Syrel (Mr. Pencil as found in the Castello di San Giorgio in Mantova, Italy) Sculpture: L’Artista invisibile. Lucio and Peppe Perone Musical Notes: Should I be embarrassed that I borrowed to so many composers. Nope. But you may recognize Lorne, Hans, John, Sergey, Pyotr, Maurice and many others. I had so much fun making this pastiche ;o)
  7. Luc Clouseau is the proud son of the French inspector Jacques Clouseau and his ex-wife Simone Clouseau. Having the same talent as his father for investigation, he is to police investigation what P.D.Q. Bach is to music, a total disaster. Stay tuned on Fetchflix TV during the next months and enjoy this new series called “The wacky adventures of Inspector Looso”. “This story is a work of fiction. Any similarity to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events, is purely coincidental. Ho and for those who did not get it, Fetchflix TV is also fictitious.” Musical note: You may recall the theme I used in the Rust & Bones Inspector Looso track. However, this time I tried to use the humor and derision of John Williams and added the sarcastic tone of the American composer and musical satirist Peter Schickele who created the fictional composer P.D.Q. Bach as well as the Gerhard Hoffnung humoristic music.
  8. Hi Mark, thanks for your comment. When the penultimate tutti section came to a natural close, I could immediately hear Amazing Grace in my mind. So I included it was part of the overall work. Amazing Grace is a piece which resonates with my spirit very closely. And during this time in my life, I feel more closely to it than ever. So perhaps that is why I could hear it being sung in my imagination. "By the way the orchestra has a wonderful texture/color." Thank you. Trying to evoke powerful colours through music is something I really aspire to do. I think I still have a long way to go in achieving it. The music can go even further in trying to evoke a rainbow of sonorities . Perhaps I just need to be braver in trusting my imagination. The idea/purpose behind integrating the choral work was that
  9. Thank you very much. After reading yours and @MJFOBOE comment, I am going to study/listen to some music that is overtly pointillistic music so that I can immerse myself in that style more purposefully. Yes, the gospel choir joins right at the end. It was not planned beforehand. The idea just came to me at that moment. I could hear Amazing Grace in my head - and I did not not want to ignore what I could hear just because it wouldn't make immediate logical sense. If it came into my mind whilst composing, then I trust that it makes sense, somehow. Indeed, that they connect by being in the same key is merely a coincidence. If the two sections were in different keys, I would still be ok with it. "mostly quite enjoyable" makes me smile. (hopefully there is an added emphasis on the 'mostly!').
  10. MP3 Play / pause Butterfly Net - Caroline Polachek 1:11 4:46 volume > next menu Butterfly Net - Caroline Polachek > next PDF Butterfly Net - Caroline Polachek That's a very lovely work.
  11. Today I was scrolling on youtube, pretty mindlessly until I came to a video that I had seen before. It was a video of a biker talking about visiting his friend, stopping by a road station to grab a beer for him. Then it cuts to him walking up a mountain, and over the hill crests dozens of crosses. And you realize his friend is not alive, and the beer was not to be drunk. And this mountain with dozens of crosses, fabric flapping in the wind, shoes dangling, and full beers at the base of each cross, was beautiful. This piece, which was a hyper fixation today, is an attempt to communicate the bitter beauty of this scene.
  12. Thank you for giving it a listen and describing what you liked about it. It seems like you understood and appreciated my piece the most at the parts I also cared the most about. Thank you for listening! I appreciate your feedback from before, helping me get this piece right.
  13. UPDATE: I have finished my score, and all instruments are audible in the audio file! (The missing violin glitch resolved itself) I will upload the score/parts to ArrangeMe as soon as I run them past my teacher. I'm not permitted to sell this outside of ArrangeMe, but I hope you all enjoy looking and listening! This was challenging and truly rewarding for me. Please do not hold back any constructive criticism! This will be the first arrangement I publish online, so it's the start of my journey. Butterfly Net - Caroline Polachek.pdf Butterfly Net - Caroline Polachek.mp3
  14. Thank yoy for the suggestion! Fortunately, the audio file creation bug resolved itself, though.
  15. Hi -- Thank you so much for listening! I agree, it is a stunning song. I appreciate your helpful comments. The bug resolved on its own, within that file, and I'm not quite sure why still. In the meantime, I was able to complete the score and parts. Maybe the issue resolved when I used Finale's "generate new parts" feature -- my finally hearing the first violin in my audio exports seemed to coincide with that.
  16. Hello @Aw Ke Shen! This piece held my interest much more consistently and really took the idea of repetition with variation to heart. I'm glad you're taking this avenue in your development and I'm enjoying it very much! I think there is still a spot where you sequence a certain figuration by walking up the scale step by step - for me that was still a bit predictable. But there are styles of music where more repetition or sequencing is expected such as minimalism. And there's ways of making that work if you want to explore that. Btw - I loved the canonic imitation between the right and left hands - a great example of repetition that enriches the listening experience because of a shift in the metric placement of the material. Thanks for sharing!
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  18. It's been quite some time since I have last posted, have been really busy transitioning from one life stage to the next, so yea, here goes a new piece, " A Spring Calling " of my " The Seasons " Collection - my first piece in 3/8, and I hope it is not too repetitive - just a total of only four minutes plus tht alr include a couple of themes, variations and transitions all squeezed in. ( That said, the single themes and motifs themselves are repetitive ( even wht repetition), but I make sure they repeat much, much lesser than my previous pieces to compensate. ) Any comments appreciated! https://musescore.com/user/62605720/scores/16149598?from=notification#comment-8372710
  19. Oh, this is a must-listen. I don't doubt Mahler's influences, which I find so difficult. It is very moving and at times mournful, for example in the opening crescendo between bars 23 and 33. The following progressive entrance of wind and brass instruments is fantastic. The polyphony is superb. And it's phenomenal that the strings give way from measure 54 or so. The transition here between a very consonant atmosphere to a slightly more dissonant one and back is well constructed. Another change at 111, back to nostalgia. With a greater orchestral density, but soft, to go growing. I congratulate you enormously because it seems to me a very careful and effective work.
  20. Young composers of the U.S. and Canada, The Capital Hearings 2024 Young Composers Competition is LIVE and open for submissions! We are welcoming submission of compositions for mixed, unaccompanied vocal ensemble of 12 to 14 voices. This year, our 10th Annual Young Composers Competition is eager to hear your thoughts on our theme: The Force of Nature. If you feel like you have something to say–or find that something you’ve already written might speak to us–we’d love to hear it! All U.S. & Canadian residents age 18-40 are welcome to submit a 2-5 minute original composition (arranged for mixed, unaccompanied choir) related to this theme, and we especially welcome submissions from unique or underrepresented perspectives – and in unique or underrepresented styles. More information on the theme, guidelines for submissions, and submission instructions can be found at this link: https://www.thecapitalhearings.com/competition/ Submissions are due by June 4, 2024, and a prize of $1,000 will be awarded to the winner.. Please direct any questions to composers@thecapitalhearings.com. _________________________________________________________________
  21. At last, after a languishing period of scant inspiration (though still modest in comparison to previous instances of composer's block I frequently suffered in the past), my creativity has once again blossomed into yet another prelude and fugue. This time, however, I decided to finally put my organ soundbanks to good use, and I cannot deny finding the results even more pleasant to the ear than otherwise relying on my harpsichord soundfont as usual in most of my renderings. The a-posteriori title in German ("Heldenreise") is a reference to the Jungian concept of the "hero's journey", since I apodictically considered the prelude's dotted rhythms to convey a more hesitant demeanour than the fugue, as hinted by the character markings at the beginning of either movement. Enjoy! YouTube video link:
  22. Just one that allows one to make unlimited Synthesias for free ( from any of one's music files in MIDI and MusicXlm ) with just the most basic functions. I am trying out piano Vfx and its kinda complicated for me. Synthesia free version only give a short preview of ur piece. Anything free, simple ones to recommend?
  23. Hi! @arpeggia. I really enjoyed this piece too! the chromaticism, dissonance, the use of accents which makes it sound as if the strong and weak beats subverts what is typical of a waltz, yet still stay consistent enough to be easily recognizable as a waltz, which makes it a very interesting and engaging! A lot of drama within a short span of around one and a half minutes. Well Done! I agree with @PeterthePapercomPoser that would be a good extension if you want, a middle, contrasting part to what already is there. Thks for sharing!
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