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That's a bit of a loaded question, don't you think? Range/tessitura-wise I think you do a pretty good job of using the nice sounds from each instrument. The key change was relatively smooth for a whole step change. The ending portion where the two instruments switch off feels a little bit out of character since the instruments blend together so nicely until that point. Maybe have them end homophonically (melody/accompaniment) or even polyphonically (two different melodies) to bring back that unity just for the end. It could have gone more places dynamically, especially text adventure games like that can get a little too in your face, but this variated enough to where the track as it now can be laid down. I'd experiment if you have some time though. I think it sounds great! You have a lucky friend.

Well, I certainly didn't expect that Interesting work. I want to say that I find andante scherzando to be a hilarious tempo marking but it's aptly named here. I also want to apologize for the MIDI... saxes kind of get a bad rep in the classical realm, clearly. m. 11-12, you want a pause/breath and also a slur? I've just never seen it written like that. I'm also confused why you restate 4/4 in the last measure... it's not like it changed? Very interesting stuff!