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Unsent Letter - Cello
Hi Peter. Thanks for listening and your thoughts. You are right in what you say. Even though the cello ascend for a short time, I always kept the pizzicato accompaniment low. I have a hard time preventing sounds from mixing when I expand the range, I think this may be related to my inability to go beyond basic harmony knowledge. I need to improve myself in this regard, thanks again
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Unsent Letter - Cello
@Alex Weidmann Thank you for listening and commenting.I am glad you like it. Yes, there could be some variety, I need to improve myself in accompaniment. @Henry Ng Tsz Kiu Hi Henry. I watched this movie, yumeji's theme is really great music. Actually, it came to my mind when I was composing the piece You are right about variety. The problem is that when I use more materials and variety, I lose the holistic context in my music and it looks like a compostion of inconsistent sentences. I don't know exactly how to overcome this problem, I think I should improve myself more in this regard. Thanks for listening and your suggestions.
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Albayrak started following The Fall - piano and strings , Unsent Letter - Cello , Isolation - Strings and 1 other
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Unsent Letter - Cello
A piece I wrote for solo cello and pizzicato ensemble. I'm waiting for your thoughts
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Isolation - Strings
@PeterthePapercomPoserThanks a lot, Peter, for listening and comment. actually there is a piano sound that copying the first violins, you may have heard it like a harp because its sound is low.(the sound delay in short notes in strings led me to this, but harp is a better idea) Harp could have been good on this piece indeed, I will consider this @Henry Ng Tsz KiuThanks a lot for your comment Henry, I'm glad you like it. Actually this is what I wanted, but I agree the harp will support the atmosphere of the piece, thank you for your opinion @Left UnexplainedThanks a lot for listening and comment, I'm glad you like it
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Isolation - Strings
A piece I wrote for string orchestra. Thanks for any thoughts or comments.
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Motiveless - Sin Motivo
It's really impressive. It has a bittersweet feeling. It seems to be an expression of some good memories, albeit sad ones. Beautiful but like memories that no longer exist
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Soliloquy for Guitar (about 1'20")
impressive piece. Reminds me of Tarrega style. I didn't examine it very much, but as you said, some sustain notes seem impossible. Also, long legato are often not possible on the guitar, unlike other instruments, pull off and hammer on techniques are applied, I should ask if this is your intention? The chord in measure 32 doesn't seem possible even with the 6th string downgraded to D, but I hear it arpeggiated in the audio file.The hard part of writing for a solo guitar is that one hand struggles with polyphonic harmonization, and for this you need to know the keyboard very well, and I think you've accomplished that.
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48H game jam 3/3
great, all three are good. maybe an instrument with a wind effect in the background would create a nice effect
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The Mandolin
Nice piece. The tremolo is a nice way to imitate the sound of a mandolin. It has a slightly neo-baroque feel. if the mandolin part can be played it would make a nice arrangement for small baroque orchestra
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Inevitable End - piano and strings
My aim in this piece is to create an emotional and sad theme with a simple motif
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Melody for cello and piano
nice, i like this piece. maybe a little more variety on the piano would be nice, but I understand what you want to do here. I hope your friend liked it.
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Minuet for string trio
A nice minuet, that's easy to play. viola could have been higher in some parts but it's beautiful as it is
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The Fall - piano and strings
Thanks a lot for your comment. I'm glad you think so
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The Fall - piano and strings
A piece that I composed for piano and strings in soundtrack style
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Nocturne n°3 in Eb M
really nice, emotional atmosphere. the contrast in the middle part creates a nice effect