John Doe

Thanks for your detailed suggestions! In the matter of fact, the last three measures I was originally having a quiet ending, yet thinking it would not fit the scherzando feeling, so I ended up having a sf ending. I agree with you that it might make the balance go off, I should actually instead have a clear theme and extend the melody more. Appreciation for your ideas to let me know the inferior section and technique in the piece! I would definitely look into them in the future!

Understand! Thanks for your comment! Ill try to work on that😀

Thanks for your detailed reply! The scattered motifs is something I wanted to imply inside the work, haha sorry if it doesn't match your taste! One little question is about the ending, like, I wanna know more about how is it contrived? No offense, just want to know more about the problem in the music. There I changed the dissonance to consonance instead to create the hints of the original motif, maybe I think is the transition from a relatively unease atmosphere to a sudden consonance making it feels very reluctant and arificial for the ending... Anyways, looking forward to your reply!

Thanks for your compliment!🙂

Greetings everybody here! The following is another piece of work in the same set as the previous work: Miroirs et Fleur et de Lune. This work is entitled as Jeux, trying to picture a game of light and dark, switching from dissonance to finally a pentatonic scale, a joy atmosphere at D major. This work is finished in a rush, so... there might be a lot of flaws lol, so please comment on my work to help it become better 😀 Imago_III_V_Jeux.mp3

It sound really nice! You did successfully picture a scenario of a boat on an unstable ocean with the arpeggios and triplets, also the contrast of tone colours! Overall, a good job mate, effort you paid is heard in the work.

Many thanks to you, mate! I'm glad to know that you are a pianist! I originally want to make it somehow more virtuoso and skilled-demand, yet worried that it would be overwhelmed somehow 🙂 Thanks for letting me know that it is playable lol and thanks for your comment. In fact, I do have some other piece, yet most of them are incomplete... So I may upload more of my work if I finished them! Big thanks again!

Thanks bro! I did learn from Debussy and Ravel for the impressionism mood, yet I wasn't really professional in music cus I am just only an amateur lol! I compose according to my feelings, so in my perspective it is like a mirror reflecting my emotions! I am certainly discovering more in the forum haha, so I might comment below in the future too! Again an appreciation to your compliments, I wasn't expecting a such detailed comment!

Thanksss for your compliment!😃

thanks for your appreciation☺️! but.....uhhhhhh the sharps and flats are a bit messy and I am not sure if it is playble... Anyways, Ill send the score here, thanks

Thanks for your compliment! Unfortunately, the score wasn't ready to be shown...

Hi everybody, hope you have a nice day! Imago_II_V_Miroir de fleurs et de lune.mp3 it is my first piece here, I hope everybody enjoys and gives some comment!Imago_II_V_Miroir de fleurs et de lune.pdf