selcukozer001

Hi, Could you pleaseCanon in Me.mp3 check o ut my piece and give feedback? Thanks so much.

Dear All, I am presenting my latest song in this post. I finalized it a few weeks ago. I'll be glad if you listen to it and tell me what you think. Best regards, Velvet.pdf Selcuk Ozer

Dear @Lotsy piano and @Tónskáld I'm sorry for my late reply. Than you for your detailed analysis. I can't tell how much I appreciate these constructive critiques. I'll keep them in my mind. Thanks for helping me to improve myself.

Hi @Jean Szulc Thanks for listening. I'm attaching the sheets. Sarab.pdf

https://soundcloud.com/selcukozer001/sarab Hi, I have recently finished composing this piano track. I was inspired by Sarabande of Handel (That is why I named it "Sarab" :)). I wonder if you like it. Please also give me some feedback. Thanks for listening to it.

It is a beautiful piece. Especially I liked the transitions between 45-60, and 1:30-1:44. Well done!

Hi @.Em. Thanks for your feedback. Actually the computer played the piece. Unfortunately I am not a performer 😞 I dream that one day my compositions would be so good that some performers will play it 🙂 Anyway thanks for your feedback again.

Dear @Mark101 and @Ken320 Thanks for your comments and feedback. The song doesn't have words. I thought I would add lyrics to the song if it is good enough. I think you both right about your opinions. I think I will reuse the phrases in another song. Thanks for your review again :)

Hello, I'll be very glad if you check out my song and tell your opinion. https://soundcloud.com/selcukozer001/a-rose-in-winter

Hello All, I wrote this piece several years ago. I noticed that I haven't posted it here. So I'm sharing it here to get some feedback. Best regards, Selcuk Ozer

Hi @Ampnoe's Thanks for your comment. I am so glad that you liked it 🙂

Dear All, Please check out my new piano composition. I listened to it too many times and I think I became insensitive to the parts that sound out of harmony (if exists). It would be quite useful for me if you point the parts that sound good or bad.

Hi @Luis Hernández I'm so glad that you liked it 🙂 Thanks for your useful feedback. Dynamics is what I usually ignore 🙂

@Gustav Johnson Hi Gustav, Thanks for your analysis. Your feedback is quite useful for me. I think I'll revise it or compose a new one using your suggestions. I also liked phrases at measure 18-24. I think I'm gonna use those measures in another composition. Thanks for your listening and commenting again 🙂

@Gustav Johnson Thanks for your comment. I generated the score from midi using Musescore. It seems quite messy but I don't know how to fix it. I attached the generated sheet.

Hello, Please check out my latest composition. Hope you like it.

@Monarcheon and @eternum1968 Thanks for taking your time and your feedbacks. They are quite useful for me. 🙂

@Monarcheon Thanks for reviewing my song. I think you are right about the continuity of the harmony and I should work on it.

Hello, Could you please check my piano piece and tell what you think? Thanks for listening 🙂

Dear Friends, I have finished two short piano pieces. I post one of them here. I'll start another topic for the other one. I'd appreciate if you check it and tell what you think.

Dear @Mark101and @Ken320Thanks for your comments. They are quite useful for me. 😊

Dear Friends, Can you check out my new song and give some feedback? Thanks. Listen_to_my_last_cry.mp3

Hi @kylebnjmnross Thanks for your comment. It didn't snow here this winter. Maybe because of this longing I wrote this piece. :)

Hello Dear Friends, I'm posting my new song and looking forward to hearing your comments. I call it snowfall as snow sometimes falls harshly sometimes falls smoothly. I hope you enjoy it. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q-qx5moxB8g&feature=youtu.be

Hi @ilv Thanks for your kind comments. I checked the file uploaded here and noticed that the song skips some parts somehow. There is a general problem with the forum I think. I also uploaded the song to Youtube and sharing the link here. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M8GMh0nyn5Q&feature=youtu.be