The Storm Lullaby

Again, a completely over-hauled version of my previous piece, The Rain Lullaby. This starts out with a turbulent intro, and then a transition into the lullaby. Also, there's background ambiance of the waves crashing on the shore. Enjoy =)Update: the ambiance has a higher volume now :P

The Storm Lullaby

Nice work, Zach. I wish I could hear the waves a little louder though - there barely audible! I only heard them really at the end. I must say this is a gorgeous work! Perhaps, this is one of your best. 10/10 and faved!

Nice work, Zach. I wish I could hear the waves a little louder though - there barely audible! I only heard them really at the end. I must say this is a gorgeous work! Perhaps, this is one of your best. 10/10 and faved!

I think you're right about the waves needing to be louder: I'll fix that in a jiffy.

Thanks so much for commenting and favoriting! :D

I like how "The rain lullaby" became "the storm lullaby" :lol:

I like how it opens with storm like chords and then from underneath this comes the gorgeous RH and simple melody.

A few things:

- Bar 21, I'm not sure the RH works. It's not really setting up for anything new and it breaks the nice wave flow you have.

- The piece didn't really become anything or have a solid development.

This is a very nice piece and I would agree with Jason, perhaps the best I've heard from you. :phones:

I like how "The rain lullaby" became "the storm lullaby" :lol:

I like how it opens with storm like chords and then from underneath this comes the gorgeous RH and simple melody.

A few things:

- Bar 21, I'm not sure the RH works. It's not really setting up for anything new and it breaks the nice wave flow you have.

- The piece didn't really become anything or have a solid development.

This is a very nice piece and I would agree with Jason, perhaps the best I've heard from you. :phones:

Thanks for the thoughts John, much appreciated :D

This is a great soothing atmospheric piece... I liked it. Very simple melody and harmony, used to great effect as well. Nice work

Nice atmosphere, but I've heard this so many times before. Even with the waves sounds you could have done something more original and "you." This is a rather staple style of piano music and I think it could benefit from more variety. You did a very nice job within this style though, if your aim was to keep it simple. It doesn't really go anywhere, though. Like I said - variety could improve.

Nice atmosphere, but I've heard this so many times before. Even with the waves sounds you could have done something more original and "you." This is a rather staple style of piano music and I think it could benefit from more variety. You did a very nice job within this style though, if your aim was to keep it simple. It doesn't really go anywhere, though. Like I said - variety could improve.

Let me explain: this was, in essence, the second piece I ever made. So, I had no idea at the time I was using a staple style :lol: The piece is very much "me", because I didn't get it from anywhere else, really.

It's like this: I've seen people "come up" with the term "I'm roadkill on the information superhighway!" Or however that saying goes exactly, I can't quite remember. These people thought of the idea themselves, but it's a fairly obvious idea, so many other people had already thought of it anyway.

Thanks for commenting :)

Nothing bad to say! I LOVED IT!

But you need some dynamic changes and build it. I might learn this as it is because I liked it so much. =)

Nothing bad to say! I LOVED IT!

But you need some dynamic changes and build it. I might learn this as it is because I liked it so much. =)

I'd be honored if you'd learn it :blush: :) Thank you! It's a pretty simple piece, it wouldn't take you long at all, I'm sure.