In the clouds do bells ring

This is a piece that I made inspired by the upbeat energetic music used in Pokemon

It does certainly does feel like it could be part of the Pokémon city soundtrack! Maybe ask GameFreak to add it in the Alola region? :D

Anyway, I think it needs to develop a little more harmonically. You have a really cool melody line that jumps all over the place melodically and I can only imagine what kind of unique harmonies you could put under it. Wha you have here is pretty good; I just want more music to accompany it, to make it sound fuller.

I agree with Monarcheon. Since the melody is repetitive, the variation could be in harmony.

So this is the sound of my opponent in the Chrono Trigger competition...mwuahaha lol just joking.

You know when your band come in (drums, snare, bells etc.) It sounds well mixed and the sound of the kick drum sound perfect.

Now as far as melody I also agree with both Monarcheon and Luis. The melody could use more development and I get a sense that maybe introducing more instruments could possibly amplify what you already have created...speaking of which I should take my own advice hahaha.

Overall it sounds good and I think you've done an amazing job so far.

Edited October 26, 20169 yr by LostSamurai

Thank you for the feedback, now that I listen to it again I agree that does lack in the harmony and development. I hope I can apply the advice and revive it after its 3 months of being stagnant, and dead, and dusting up on my desktop. Yup.