October 26, 20169 yr Hi I like very very much this piece. The average mood is romantic and dreamy; I even perceive the feelings you write: "con trizteza..." Only one observation: The main theme, being beautiful, relies on an excesive repetition of the motive. This makes that, taking it as a whole, the motive is heard too many times, a little bit tiring. On the other hand, the variations on this main theme are great. Also, I think a contrasting modulation in some part would have been interesting.
October 26, 20169 yr While the form is definitely that of a rondo, I see it as kind of a mix of that and a passacaglia, which is interesting, considering how often the main motif repeats. On it's own though, I would agree with Luis, provided that wasn't your intention. I feel like you don't necessarily travel with the harmonic structure that much when given the opportunity... simply a collection of 4-bar phrases. It does sound very nice, though, and well orchestrated at that. Some of the left hand parts with Pedal might get a bit messy, but with control it should be fine. Well done.
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