S.G. Faustmann Posted January 8, 2017 Share Posted January 8, 2017 (edited) Hi ! :) I ended one of my biggest project at the time. I invite You to the world of fable, dance and magic. Hope to a critic/feedback from You <3 My inspiration was the Concept Art/Painting, which i look at it - the history shows me and music comes itself. Enjoy. Soundcloud - S.G. Faustmann - Magic Waltz in the Library Inspiration: Edited January 8, 2017 by S.G. Faustmann 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted January 11, 2017 Share Posted January 11, 2017 Bit fast for a typical waltz, no? I don't know, maybe not. Your chord progression is a little awkward, especially when the last chord adds the supertonic it disguises it as something it shouldn't be. Passing tone issues when the solo viola or cello comes in. 6/8 part is not a waltz; triplets are too fast, yeah? Also, too fast pizzicatos. Parallel fourths at the end. Be careful. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bassoongirl123 Posted January 22, 2017 Share Posted January 22, 2017 Wow. I don't know why no one else has liked this yet. I like the orchestration/instrumentation. I wouldn't exactly call it a waltz though.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Some Guy That writes Music Posted January 22, 2017 Share Posted January 22, 2017 Like Monarcheon said, it's quite fast, it would be pretty difficult dance to in time. Also unless those pizzicatos are alternating (just like "Alternating-facts") that's really fast even for a talented soloist. I just wanted to emphasize those two points. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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