January 15, 20179 yr Hi, I have uploaded this piece before and I have included feedback, I received, in the first movement. The original description: For my audition for pre-study at the conservatory with classical saxophone I played the Cinq Danses Exotiques by Jean Françaix. I fell in love with his music. On account of Françaix' music I composed 3 Melodies for Alto Saxophone and Piano, Opus 25 (Dutch: Drie Melodieën voor Altsaxofoon en Piano) today. Feedback and sharing your opinions would make me very happy! Stay tuned for the other two melodies! Maarten Bauer
January 15, 20179 yr Great! I think you were really smart with the treatment of the material you wrote, and it feels much more like a fully formed piece now. Looking forward to hearing more!
January 20, 20179 yr I quite liked this. If there's one thing I would try to do a bit better, it'd be the recapitulation to the beginning transition. I found it extremely awkward. But good otherwise, I think!
January 20, 20179 yr Author 43 minutes ago, Monarcheon said: I quite liked this. If there's one thing I would try to do a bit better, it'd be the recapitulation to the beginning transition. I found it extremely awkward. But good otherwise, I think! Thank you for listening. I will try to make it sound less awkward by making the transition more fluent, if you mean this with awkward.
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