O barco e a sereia

A prelude.

Edited April 30, 20178 yr by Denatura Sonorum

Beautiful harmonies. I miss some more activity in the left hand (at least in part of the work). But it's nice.

Very nice, I like the gentle progressions and the laid back Sunday morning feel it gave me.  You have a couple of G flats at the beginning and later near the end that seem to stick out a bit to me, that was probably your intention but there's something that just doesn't work with them for me since the rest of the piece is very smooth.

Edited January 26, 20179 yr by Mark101

Thank you, very much, Luis Hernández and Mark101 for listen and comment.

Hi.
I've added a new central section and made some adjustments.
I feel it's more complete now.

Um abraço.

Edited February 3, 20179 yr by Denatura Sonorum