July 26, 20178 yr Well, first off, that final chord was begging for a resolution, even if it was one with extensions. Overall, it has a great feel with the descending line, but the fact it never leaves that bothers me a bit. Yes, I know, jazz and the consistency of bass and all that but the lack of a typical "melody line" calls for a little bit more eccentrics with the flow of the piece.
July 27, 20178 yr Quite lovely.. a little bit more variation in right hand 1/8th notes.. A melody would be nice, but then you couldn't perform it the way it is now, without changing up the right hand.. Really sets a comforting feeling, like the desending line..
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