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Hi :D Here i've got something with athmosphere of virgin valley. I wanted to has it as a short intro, like exploration suite in the game. Some kind of stronger ambient, but the main target was to achieve emotional aura and feeling of this beautiful land.

I'm very interesting about your opinion with this super-easy short arrangement, melody and harmony. :) Hope You like it!

>> Youtube - Primeval Valley <<

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Magnificent.

The melody is rich and it combines very well with the harmony beneath it.
The composition has a relaxed mood.
Your sense for orchestration is marvelous and the simplicity of it makes this piece so beautiful: the music does not need any decorations; it decorates itself.

Thank you for sharing! I am a fan of your music.

Maarten

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The mixing on the first melody line is kind of weird. Have it blend in a little more. 
Going from G major to B minor in the exposition was also strange with the melody since it pedals on the minor ninth of the latter chord with a suspended tone.
The ending also was a bit weak for me in terms of the chord structure. Doesn't really feel at home harmonically, and the end on the third of the chord is kind of unsettling.
Other than that, it flows very nicely.

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I love this piece. As a standalone, it would need more development, but as part of a larger work, it's good as is.

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