October 30, 20178 yr A very short piece (I'm wondering if I could make it longer) for Violin, French Horn and Piano.
October 31, 20178 yr Very nice melody. The Pizzicato in the violin is definitely my favorite part. Can't really deconstruct it because I am a student and only 16 but I like the piece and I think it is very good.
November 3, 20178 yr In the opening, when the piano comes in with the quarter note then the four eighth notes, it sounds quite awkward. After that, the next 2 bars sounds like the beginning of a sequence that was never used to it's full extent. Perhaps continuing with two more bars before moving on it necessary to secure a better grounding. The whole piece has a very baroque feel to it (correct me if I'm wrong). Some of the bars have "incorrect" harmonic progression (such as bar 6 with the descending eighth notes in the violin and piano. Add more embellishments, a longer development before jumping into 4/4 and perhaps ever split it up into two parts (that was very common back then: think about prelude and fugues).
November 20, 20178 yr It is quite 'eastern' at the start. I think you used a harmonic minor at the start. I don't quite like the harmony though. To extend and develop, you can do an inversion of the melody, augmentation and diminution, embellish with a few trills or turns. Hope to see an extended version of this piece! Hope it is rather more exciting to hear.
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