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My first ever completed composition from March 2017.

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Hello!

I love your use of rhythm, especially in the opening and closing sections! I wish though that you could somehow spice up the middle section a little with the same kind of rhythmic vitality. I also love your theme that you use in the opening! I think you could find a way to weave little parts of this theme (motifs) into the second theme to help the piece hold together I little more clearly.

Great work! It would sound great on an acoustic piano! 

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