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Hi¬† Young Composers ! This one¬†was from my first piano "compositions" years ago. Its a few seconds¬†sample.¬†The final edition¬†track¬†is very diferent & includes this piano piece¬†. Perhaps¬†almost ready to complete the whole album¬†& these days i have drunk many coffeesūü§™, many nights to make the last editions on every track. ő§he small tries¬†that ALL OF US¬†maőļe ¬†gives us so much happines, and this make sense! You already know that anyway¬†ūüėČ

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2nd inversion chord at :36 was a bit strange.
Your piano soundfont follows the electric one which makes things sound like unresolved suspensions or retardations. 
It ends on a v chord which is a bit strange, especially since it doesn't have the effect of a turnaround loop.
It also doesn't really need to be this short I think. Especially with the electronic element, you could have a section with just a chill drum groove in the back of similar musical material and use this time to modulate and go to lots of fancy places. It's just a very safe piece right now.

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That's the final version guys! i hope to enjoy this  piece ! i will make remixes time by time! thank you all!

 

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