May 1, 20187 yr Hey, everyone ! It's been a few years since I've last posted on this forum.. I haven't been as productive with composing as I should've been these past few years.. needless to say, I'm still pretty new. 😛 Here's a piece I finished back in 2014 and posted here a long time ago.. So, since I'm getting back into composing (and that this is arguably my best work out of the very few I have) I wanted some fresh feedback on it.. I wanna improve as a composer.. so please, don't hold back with the critiques. 🙂 Cheers! Nic https://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/8196350de48ded3feb3b24a05e70cc59e7124e39
May 1, 20187 yr It is nice to listen to it, it has beautiful melodies. I wonderful why you wrote all the left hand in eighths... with the pedal they could have been written in fourths . I would think of adding some middle section changing the texture or the rhythm.
May 2, 20187 yr I listened to the piece and it's awesome. I'm a huge fan waltz and nocturne (specially in Chopin's style) and your piece was one of the closest ones to chopin's pieces!
June 6, 20187 yr I liked it all but the ending. The root E tonic triad in bar 60 show be just a fifth.
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