A trouble in the dark

This is my first time I am composing a piece for so many instruments so any feedback would be very helpful. I hope you will like it.

P.S: This score is the third part of my series of scores called The Legend of Nabhi. You can also listen to the first two parts if you want.

If I were in the audience listening to something of this title, I would think that going into a major sound a few bars in would be an interesting choice.

Yes, the volume is equal all the time. One would expect some kind of climax somewhere. Perhaps is because of the soundfonts...