A brilliant piano waltz

I wrote this short waltz for piano. I hope it can be interesting. Feedback apprecciated

https://soundcloud.com/roberto-zini-84021232/valzer-dei-mirtilli-1

Edited August 7, 20187 yr by eternum1968

It sounds nice.

Can't really say more than that because I have no notes to look at.

Thank you for the reply.

In the attachment there is the sheet music of the piece.

I don't have much time,

here are two things I noticed:

1. Your dynamics should have a sharper change. It never moves above F or below MP.

If you want a static piece (it should be a static dance I think?) then fine, but keep that in mind.

2. A waltz, as far as I know, should be in 3/4.

Look what you did:

For many years I didn't know the difference between 6/8 and 3/4.

After all, in maths, 6/8 and 3/4... are the same thing!

But here it's different.

Look at the way the bar is separated.

6/8 separates it to two threes,

while 3/4 separates it to three twos.

It also sounds like 3/4.

So- change the time signature to 3/4 and the way the eights are separated into three groups of two instead two groups of three.

Good luck.

Thank you very much for your gentle advices. I'll correct the time signature in 3/4 and I'll try to obtain the right grouping of notes.

Excuse me for the waste of time.

Cheers.

1 hour ago, eternum1968 said:

Excuse me for the waste of time.

It's fine, helping someone isn't a waste of time.

It's just that my last day of freedom for the next free year is about to be over soon and I can't really focus enough to give you the full advice you deserve.