Guillem82 Posted July 30, 2019 Share Posted July 30, 2019 (edited) Here is my first Classic Bagatelle for piano with an A-B-A' structure. I appreciate your comments. Edited July 30, 2019 by Guillem82 MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Bagetelle nº1_FM > next PDF Bagatelle nº1_FM Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis Hernández Posted July 30, 2019 Share Posted July 30, 2019 It sounds nice. It's like an echo of mozart with sustain pedal here and there.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J.Santos Posted July 30, 2019 Share Posted July 30, 2019 Incredible piece, is really beautiful, but I think it really lacks of originality, I can only see Mozart, not your own voice, maybe sometimes something of you cames, other resemble to Beethoven. It's great, but I think you should put more of yourself, otherway, it's a nice work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emiliano Manna Posted July 31, 2019 Share Posted July 31, 2019 Delicious! You surely know well the rhetorical elements typical of Classical style. Bars 17-18 don't sound totally "right" to my ears: perhaps I'm missing a third repetition before the closing bar. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnKiunke Posted July 31, 2019 Share Posted July 31, 2019 Some of the voice leading and pacing could be cleaned up a bit, hearing more classical-era music and a lot of score study will give you a natural feel for that kind of thing. It's a nice piece, there are just parts every now and then that don't sound exactly "right" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guillem82 Posted August 10, 2019 Author Share Posted August 10, 2019 Thanks a lot for your comments! I agree with you, I love Mozart, Haydn and Beethoven and there is a more than obvius influence of them in there. But I know I have still a lot to learn and probably finding my own style. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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