Bagatelle Num.1 in FMajor

Here is my first Classic Bagatelle for piano with an A-B-A' structure.

I appreciate your comments.

Edited July 30, 20196 yr by Guillem82

It sounds nice. It's like an echo of mozart with sustain pedal here and there....

Incredible piece, is really beautiful, but I think it really lacks of originality, I can only see Mozart, not your own voice, maybe sometimes something of you cames, other resemble to Beethoven. It's great, but I think you should put more of yourself, otherway, it's a nice work

Delicious! You surely know well the rhetorical elements typical of Classical style.

Bars 17-18 don't sound totally "right" to my ears: perhaps I'm missing a third repetition before the closing bar.

Some of the voice leading and pacing could be cleaned up a bit, hearing more classical-era music and a lot of score study will give you a natural feel for that kind of thing. It's a nice piece, there are just parts every now and then that don't sound exactly "right"

Thanks a lot for your comments! I agree with you, I love Mozart, Haydn and Beethoven and there is a more than obvius influence of them in there.

But I know I have still a lot to learn and probably finding my own style.