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Hi,

Does your song have words?

I think I would be tempted to take it at a slightly slower pace and give it more sustain pedal, give the piece room to breath.  The last few heavy chords were a bit too much for me too, although it would probably make more sense with a voice track added.

I liked it though.

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The phrases are unclear as is the meter. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not. Do you have the score to post here - it would help.

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Dear @Mark101 and @Ken320

Thanks for your comments and feedback. The song doesn't have words. I thought I would add lyrics to the song if it is good enough. I think you both right about your opinions. I think I will reuse the phrases in another song. Thanks for your review again :)

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10 minutes ago, .Em. said:

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
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On 8/3/2019 at 12:23 PM, selcukozer001 said:

 

 

 

 

On 8/3/2019 at 12:23 PM, selcukozer001 said:
I agree with the above replies. Almost sounds like the computer piano is playing. (Sorry for the wording i hope you get what i mean) but i liked it! Looking forward to hearing it revised

 

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Hi @.Em.

Thanks for your feedback. Actually the computer played the piece. Unfortunately I am not a performer 😞 I dream that one day my compositions would be so good that some performers will play it 🙂

Anyway thanks for your feedback again.

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