MDErvin 0 Posted August 16, 2019 I have been assigned to create(arrange) this piece, I am worried it is too dissonant and a bit too unfamiliar. I changed the instrument sounds because it is easy for me to work with any other sound than the default vocal samples. Any constructive feedback is welcome. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu National Anthem Arr > next Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Luis Hernández 448 Posted August 31, 2019 Actually, there are dissonances, not sure the role they have. The score would help. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monarcheon 494 Posted September 23, 2019 It is certainly more dissonant, but not enough to disfigure it (at least to me; there are plenty of anthem purists who would disagree). I think the chromatic voice leading stuff is quite lovely, actually. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Morivou_ 1 Posted October 16, 2019 No, I don't think the dissonances are too much. My own version of the National Anthem is pretty nasty in its own right. The "bombs bursting in air" sounds weird to me. Maybe look at that. I LOVE what you did on "free". Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
