Into the unknown we go

A little piece I made a while ago.

Hey!

I quite like this. However, I think the rhythms could be worked a bit. I feel like the tenuto you're using will sound better if you have a slower tempo. Personally, I believe that if you want to keep this tempo, you should connect the chords a little bit better, maybe adding a long pedal note, adding a bit more rhythmic diferenciation between the voices, etc. That will better showcase the harmonic material you have going on, which I feel is weakened by the current arrangement. 

This piece has potential, but it needs some more work.

I hope my opinion was of any help!

Best wishes, Jean.

Thank you Jean, yes this was one I was kind of unsure of and that's why I posted it. I like your ideas, I'll think of them while writing my next piece for strings.