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Hey everyone ! 

I'd like to share with you my first composition which is " L'étoile " ( the star in french) 

I hope you enjoy it 🙂

See ya

J.Kaw

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Hey, welcome to the forum!

This sounds very nice, and is well built!

Perhaps it could benefit from beign less "loopy". I mean, there's quite enough contrast and there are some very surprising turns throughout the piece, but I believe it would be more fluid if you wrote it without looping the harmonies too much. Just a thought, it already sounds quite good.

The orchestration and arrangement is very good, and helps a lot with making it sound fresh throughout.

1:47 feels veeery pleasing.

Congratulations on your first piece, it's a very solid win!

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Very dramatic! The structure and atmosphere seem very theatrical to me, so this could be well suited for a movie or tv score. Maybe some kind of documentary about space? That's what it sounds like to me at least. That was a very satisfying moment at 1:48! Nice job and I hope you keep posting here! Feel free to review others' music also, even if you don't feel confident about it. People like to hear feedback even if it's something simple!

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1 hour ago, KJthesleepdeprived said:

Very dramatic! The structure and atmosphere seem very theatrical to me, so this could be well suited for a movie or tv score. Maybe some kind of documentary about space? That's what it sounds like to me at least. That was a very satisfying moment at 1:48! Nice job and I hope you keep posting here! Feel free to review others' music also, even if you don't feel confident about it. People like to hear feedback even if it's something simple!

 

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