Jump to content
Sign in to follow this  
Fruisen

Romance in A Major

Recommended Posts

Lovely piece. Almost reminds me of a rusty music box. My only thought is to perhaps expand the material into more tonal regions -might add another depth to it. Otherwise, good work!

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

I would revoice some of your low intervals so they resonate more - moving them up in the tenor register. Either simply move it up in the chord or invert the interval.

You B-flats should be spelled A-sharp

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

I really like the duple-vs-triple that you incorporated between the two hands! You might want to consider expanding the piece, though - it's over very quickly. However, the harmonies are really nice - I love the resolution in m.6. Great work!

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

Sign in to follow this  

×
×
  • Create New...