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Hello everyone, I am back, this is my new piece, hope you like it and welcome your commentation.

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There's a problem with balance and volume in some parts.

I swear I like mixing styles, I don't have problems with that. But it seems you go far sometimes. It begins sounding between baroque and classicist. Then comes the piano with some romantic arpeggios, and there is a part that sonds almost contemporary (m. 194 on.... for example). Or the harmonics in the violin m. 55-56.

the themes are very beautiful.

I think you have lots of material but with too many styles and techniques.

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This falls into the Andalusian cadence trap of trying to think of something new for every repetition of the hypermeter and it becomes a little boring after a while. Some parts I feel like you're struggling to find something for all the instruments to do. I don't think this is necessary.

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