VovaTrykoz Posted January 27, 2020 Share Posted January 27, 2020 (edited) Hi, I wrote this piece with an intention of taking just five simple notes (which are the first five notes of the lick by the way) and turn it into a memorable motif. Here is the result: I would appreciate any feedback, not only on the music but on the production part as well (eg. mixing). I'll attach a score on this post, just in case. Finally, there is another piece that I wrote recently and which I published in the "Large Ensemble" section. However, now I feel it might have been more appropriate to post it here. So, if you have time and you haven't seen that piece go check that out as well: https://www.youngcomposers.com/t39092/bloody-mercenaries-feedback-or-thoughts-on-my-piece/. I would appreciate it a lot. Again, I would really love to hear your thoughts! Edited January 27, 2020 by VovaTrykoz PDF Fighting_the_Dragons 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShepBranson Posted February 14, 2020 Share Posted February 14, 2020 Vocals are extremely automated. I don't know if that was the intention... But for this kind of pieces I like to hear or more reverb or more warmth Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted February 24, 2020 Share Posted February 24, 2020 Transition to B-flat minor sounded really random; came out of nowhere and left very quickly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Left Unexplained Posted February 24, 2020 Share Posted February 24, 2020 this obviously took a lot of knowledge, skill and intelligence. I would not be surprised if I see your name in movie credits someday. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VovaTrykoz Posted February 27, 2020 Author Share Posted February 27, 2020 Thanks for the feedback everyone! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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