Moueen Issa Posted March 17, 2020 Share Posted March 17, 2020 Hi, I am from Syria and I'm 19 years old. This is a short solo piano piece I have composed. I hope you listen to it and give me your opinion! MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Prelude in C major > next 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tónskáld Posted March 17, 2020 Share Posted March 17, 2020 This is pretty good! It sounds fun to play, and I like how you don't just give the right hand the melody all the time. You kept my interest with the shifts in tonal centers, from major to minor, and really the whole thing fit together well. I hope you're able to have it performed someday. Thanks for sharing! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maestrowick Posted March 17, 2020 Share Posted March 17, 2020 Slow the intro down just a tad, maybe 10 ticks to make it even more playable 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J.Santos Posted March 17, 2020 Share Posted March 17, 2020 It sounds amazing! Thought there's 2 things you could improve, and I'm not talking about the piece!!! First of all: speed is not always a way to show something good. I will greatly slowdown that tempo. You need to prove a lot of tempos before deciding one. Second, it would be nice if you bring us the score too! If you have it we could criticise the scoring and have a more clear vision of the music. Keep doing this well! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maestrowick Posted March 17, 2020 Share Posted March 17, 2020 19 minutes ago, J.Santos said: It sounds amazing! Thought there's 2 things you could improve, and I'm not talking about the piece!!! First of all: speed is not always a way to show something good. I will greatly slowdown that tempo. You need to prove a lot of tempos before deciding one. Second, it would be nice if you bring us the score too! If you have it we could criticise the scoring and have a more clear vision of the music. Keep doing this well! well said! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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