March 22, 20206 yr Just two measures that stand out to me. Lack of seventh resolution in m. 11 and the D/G chord at the beginning of 17 making the dominant function sound vacuous.
March 22, 20206 yr I like it, but it could be more adventurous. That being said, I like that you compose for your instrument and can play it, I think that will serve you very well going forward.
March 30, 20205 yr Author On 3/22/2020 at 4:23 PM, Monarcheon said: Just two measures that stand out to me. Lack of seventh resolution in m. 11 and the D/G chord at the beginning of 17 making the dominant function sound vacuous. Thanks!! I've resolved the measure 17, I was supposed to use A there, not G and I didn't even notice it since it was a D major there. For the measure 17 I cannot see where's the seventh is at all. Maybe you had a mistake with the measure number?
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