antimusicale Posted May 9, 2020 Share Posted May 9, 2020 Hello, I am a modern contemporary music composer, what do you think about my new short piano piece called Flying Tears? Feedback is appreciated! Thank you and stay safe MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Flying Tears > next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tónskáld Posted May 9, 2020 Share Posted May 9, 2020 It's difficult for me to identify what musical devices you're using (without having a score to view), and thus it just sounds like you're hitting notes at random. I think I can hear some motifs emerge, maybe even some serialism. Sorry, I don't mean to come across as harsh or brutish. I do think the score or perhaps a little background into your creative process would help tremendously for feedback purposes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monarcheon Posted May 9, 2020 Share Posted May 9, 2020 I hear some ic10 intervals repeat inverted over I6 axis, but I'm with @Tónskáld in needing to hear a thicker glue for the disparate elements, even if it is written. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antimusicale Posted May 9, 2020 Author Share Posted May 9, 2020 I just run the script and gave me this, maybe the next time will be better, thank you guys! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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